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A Simple Thought by =WildThunder:iconWildThunder:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open


I see my life fading at the age of 18
Disease fills my body
There is no cure for what I am cursed with

I see my dreams melting and twisting
Mixing with a pool of tears
And sometimes I wonder where I am going

Does anyone know me?
Does anyone out there know what pains me?

I carry a burden that God gave me
It seems so impossible to carry through alone
I feel the pain daily and time is running out

I feel there is something killing me right before my eyes
I see my life ending young
I don’t want to go to that lonely place so soon
Because I fear that I wont be let in

I see the angel’s army
And see the horrors that stand in fear of them
I have seen the end of man inside my eyes
The fires burn and the bodies piled o’ so high

This is a warning to the world
That if I die in my sleep
That you know where I might not go

I fear my life may be for the fires
I’m afraid I’m meant for the flies
©2009 =WildThunder
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Author's Comments

I wrote this when I was 18. I remember writing this and figured I would share it.

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:iconkyuuketsukikami:
~kyuuketsukikami Jul 17, 2009, 7:18:17 PM
:hug: wow....that's pretty sad...but, it's also very good.
I give you props.
xx

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For a sunrise or a sunset.
You’re manic or you’re depressed.
Will you ever feel ok?
xx
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Guns don't kill people,
People wif mustaches kill people.
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=WildThunder Jul 18, 2009, 12:51:41 PM
Thank you.

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No Compromise! No Surrender! Give me liberty or give me death! If a nation expects to be ignorant and free, in a state of civilization, it expects what never was and never will be.
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~Hillbillygirl Jul 18, 2009, 5:05:33 PM
This poem is so profound, it is full of sadness. There is still time to avoid this curse you have, Just call on God and believe and in his time your dreams of horror and pain will be taken away.

I hope things are better now. You will be in my thoughts and prayers. :)
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=WildThunder Jul 18, 2009, 7:50:21 PM
Actually this is an old poem. I have known that my lord already paid the price and I have accepted his offer to me but still sometimes we have days of weakness and that was one of those days. Thanks for the outreach though.

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No Compromise! No Surrender! Give me liberty or give me death! If a nation expects to be ignorant and free, in a state of civilization, it expects what never was and never will be.
:iconhillbillygirl:
~Hillbillygirl Jul 18, 2009, 7:56:52 PM
I am so happy that you are a child of God. I have been worried since I read your poem.

True is your words. We all have those days when we slip, stumble and even fall, but the greatest thing is, God always comes to our rescue when we need him most.

Your welcome for the outreach, I am here for you anytime.

May God be with you always and keep you in his loving grace.
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=WildThunder Jul 18, 2009, 10:14:28 PM
And may he also be with you.

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No Compromise! No Surrender! Give me liberty or give me death! If a nation expects to be ignorant and free, in a state of civilization, it expects what never was and never will be.
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